Peer Evaluation 2

http://aybukeguzen.blogspot.com.tr/2016/01/reflection-task-1a-joining-group-at-metu.html

Hi Aybüke,

I agree with you about taekwondo. It can be a good choice for you and, also, learning one of the martial arts is very beneficial for people. When I was in 4^th grade I started to Karate-Do. In contrast to taekwondo, Karate-Do is a defence sport, but I think Karate is also one of the best martial arts and I have 5 medals. You wrote well but you should tell the story to us, not to the taekwondo club, I think. You wrote, for example, “I want to join you”. Second point is the height of the paragraph. I think, you can write long and there are many points that you can explain. I wish you would fix them. Bests.

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