Hi Berkay,
I think you
expressed all the emotions in our minds with these paragraphs, because most of
the students in METU have these feelings. Your writing style is great, because
there is no disconnection between sentences. That's why I felt like I am
reading in Turkish. I didn't see any grammar mistakes in your writing, which is
good for you and the readers, us. Moreover, I think, you should write “is not”
instead of “isn’t” in order to get used to formal and academic way. Although I
said to you these sentences, I did the same mistakes in reflections and, also,
in this writing. J I hope you can improve more your writing style, but it is already
great. J
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